The Time that the Sun Family Explored the
Great Wall
Zahra Hui, Gr
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oup 1: Fiction, Peak School
Beside The Great Wall of China, stood a little house. The family who lived in the little house
the Sun family. In the Sun family there was Rysty Sun, Ronny Sun, Mr. Sun and Mrs. Sun.
One winter morning, Rysty and Ronny woke up and looked out of the window and quickly
ced at the Great Wall of China. Seeing the Great Wall was covered in ice, they ran to wake their
parents.
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When Ronny and Rysty’s parents saw that the Great Wall of China was frozen, they were amazed. They
decided to explore The Great Wall. And of course the family didn’t know that there was an evil Chinese ghost
secretly living in one of the towers, so off they went.
Soon they arrived at the Great Wall. They walked along the steps of the Great Wall, only to come across a
door. It had a sign on it, saying: BEWARE OF THE GHOST! Rysty was the first to see the sign. When Mr.
Sun saw the sign he shouted
,
“
Get out of here! This place is freaky!”
Everyone in the family laughed as Mr. Sun shouted. Mrs. Sun agreed on leaving the place, even as she was
teasing Mr. Sun. Then Rysty said “I hear footsteps coming. It might be the ghost… and where is DAD?”
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But I don’t hear anything!” said Ronny. Ronny only heard it when the footsteps came even closer.
“
Don’t be afraid! It might only be Mr. Sun!” said Mrs. Sun.
“
Oh yes Mum, it’s probably Dad!” said Ronny.
“
Don’t be crazy Ronny!” Rysty exclaimed.
When the sound of the footsteps came closer, they could see that it only was Mr. Sun. “This place is scary!
It seems like I’m in danger!!!” gasped Rysty.
Just then the family heard a loud boom! When the loud boom ended, everything turned into stone, even
themselves! Rysty knew the ghost made the boom. The ghost didn’t like the Sun family to enter his secret place.
In the afternoon, the family was still stone! A few hours later, came a friendly dragon. He breathed out
warm air and in a whoosh of dust, everything became normal again.
The dragon saved everyone! Everyone thanked the dragon, and the Sun family went back to their little
house beside The Great Wall to have a quiet snooze.
That night, the ghost felt like he lost all his power. The next day, it was snowing, and the Sun family went
skiing on the Great Wall as it was covered with a thick layer of snow. The ghost was nowhere to be seen.
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